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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209503
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Shot Down!!!
(A collectively written choose-your-own-adventure Dogfight story) “Thwick-Thwack!” Your SE5a just took two hits. The sound is not unlike a couple of acorns falling on the hood of a car. You bail out while your plane goes down in flames. You desperately bring your rifle to bear! The MORAF in the on rushing D8 is opting to take you out directly rather than just aiming for your chute or your doomed plane. But your investment of time has honed some skills and chat announces that you have won the ridiculous quick-draw competition twice! YES!! First his plane then his chute! You’re amazed at how hard your heart is pumping. A moment later your soldier is touching down in the fields of Gretchland.
Congratulations!
You have leveled up to Brigadier General III "Congrats" "Gratz" "GJ" "Congratulations!" "thanks!!! Woohoo!!!" You have just reached rank #19 It’s been a good long stretch and your fires are stoked! You have finally earned your swords! The yellow rank insignia is no longer 3 stars dangling above your plane like the connect-the-dots sword below Orion’s Belt, they have been replaced by the two elegant crossed cutlasses! It's a distinction with which your eye has come to automatically mark players whom you know must not be taken for granted. Now, you are one of them. There are unfamiliar red noobs who now spot you with dread, and more blues who are glad to have you spawn on their side! Ah yes, the swords are nice…hmm… though, they would look even better surrounded by stars… You close the in-game stats board and realize that the timer has finished counting down. You have missed your chance to lob some hopeful tank shots at the airport. The rabid red defenders are now strafing your corpse, some have even come back around to bomb. Lol! You hit Retry and start on another run feeling just a touch distracted. The other blues are still in sight as you level off at 200m and pick up a little speed. The red who’s D8 you took out from the chute says “ns” “interested in a squad?” It’s ‘Eddy P.Rex’, a top 100 player with a ‘MAMAsBoYz’ squad tag. They are one of the largest squads; a real powerhouse. It’s rare to find more than a few games without one of them presiding at the top of the leader board. Before you can answer, you get other offers for squad membership: “drop by our forum thread and say you’re ready!” “Tell them I sent you” says ‘Capt. VonDouche’of "Special Ops ”; a focused killing squad with their own website, separate from the forum. They usually fly together, they seldom speak and rarely show any mercy. “They wish! Yur signing up with us right?” Says ‘Banjo Plucker’ of the ‘Kill’n’Fokkers’ They are known for their bad-ass attitudes as much as their deadly skills. They have a palpable driven team spirit and are the most likely players to have real squad tattoos and tee-shirts. “Hey bro, you’re pretty good, gratz on the swords” “We’ll let ya in if you wanna cruise with us” says ‘Mr. Blunt’ of the ‘Delta 9 High Flyerz’ They are the mellow guys who can display some awesome skills but other times you see them just sitting on the mountain tops or driving tanks off in far corners of the map. You had been holding out, waiting for invitations form all of these squads. Now the choice is before you. What will you decide? Do you: Check out the MAMAsBoYz
Check out "Special Ops"
Check out the Kill’n’Fokkers
Chill with the Delta 9 High Flyerz (featuring : "Fly. Crash. Die. Repeat." by Luna) used here as the "vision quest"
You turn them all down and make your own Squad
Warning: Spoiler!
Yea? Well then write your own story! I'll insert it. We can create a transition or if you only have part of a story feel free to submit it for collaboration.
Ignore them all and focus on tactics for the mission at hand *Write or request more story on the mission in progress*
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209506
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I invite anyone to write submissions. The only rules are:
1. No real names, (pilots or squads) 2. No being mean 3. Write in 3rd person to stick with the choose-your-own-adventure style. For more explanation and suggestions see this link I will insert story threads on the first post by anyone who would like to contribute. I would prefer it if people just post their submissions instead of quoting the whole first page. It makes it a lot easier to insert it later.
Credits
(Please generously thank all thread contributors' posts!)
Special thanks to: Mac For his story for "The MAMAsBoYz" thread and for being the first to provide corrections on "technical details" Big[G.I.]Joe for his gritty contribution to the "Kill'n'Fokkers" thread Luna for her reflective piece "Fly. Crash. Die. Repeat" used as the "vision quest" in the "Delta 9 High Flyerz" thread. ( I hope she doesn't mind that I used it this way.) Cat of doom for using his teenage feline eye to correct my improper text vernacular.
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209508
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There are only 5 choices? I would like to add one, if I can? When I had to choose there were a few big squads, and many smaller squads. I was asked to join many squads, big and small. I didn't want to be a number, nor did I believe I would make a big impact on this game. I am not a gamer, never played a Multi-Player game before. Never looked at a forum before, I'm 48, so I grew up playing PONG, Space invaders, asteroids, NES, Playstation1, but then life took over. No gaming for a long while. When I started looking at this forum, I was lost. Trying to find my way around a huge area with no map. Once I figured out how to navigate this thing called a Forum, I wasted countless hours reading old posts. I found an up and coming group of players. About 20 people who had mostly left other squads and come together to form a family. This mix of a squad was called the Misfits. Small but deadly, I never thought I would become a real member, figured I was going to wear a recruit tag forever. All of the members were helpful and nice, many PM's, texts, even phone calls came in to guide me in the right direction. Look at me now. Everyone knows who I am. I helped build one of the BIG squads. It's been a great adventure. I would like to thank all of the member of this squad for bringing me in and believing in me (even when I didn't). Yes, even you sir Fate. One of the greats, I will never forgot our conversations. You are a wise man. ALL IN 100%
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209518
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Er, pardon my correction, but one loses the stars and gets crossed swords at level 19, Brigadier General III. 22 is the first level with the term "Marshall" in it though.
Sorry, i really don't mean to nitpick, but this is a rather stressed happening in the story, and I'm sure you'd rather it was accurate. I would like a version of the story where the character is a d-bag, and hops between squadrons, finally creating his own, and having it fail.
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209545
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Aw shucks Hulky, ya big green lout! Ya bring tears to me eyes. That is a true story!
Those are also welcome here on the thread but as per the "rules" I will only add fictitious names and story arcs that I can fit with the story line. Just about anything can happen here. You can pop back into the game that's going on, team kill everyone and bomb your own hangars, go straight up the middle take everyone down with a two bullets or even your bad breath. FICTION BABY! No real names will be added unless it is as a respectful reference to someone such as zuperman. However feel free to use names such as "VonBulk" or "Blüe Mänx", or squads such as "W.O.W". the "Miscreants" or the "SkyWalkers". Just remember: no being mean. You can fly a UFO or an F16, you can use a magic wand or even The Force. Thanks very much Mac and Cat of doom! Corrections made. I couldn't remember accurately and I was certain someone would correct me if I got it wrong. Nit picking is welcome as everyone here can be an editor or critic. Feel free to comment on thread or by PM. Professor ParrotHead and Miss Luna have an open invitation to help with grammatical guidance. I can only dream that someone such as McCudden, Wig, ziza, Luna or ParrotHead will contribute! Don't worry if someone has already written a story for a particular part. If you have a small side bar, picture/screenshot, cameo... we can add that too. Feel free to create a story using one of my starts or write about a squad of your own creation. It's fine if there is more than one story option for a particular squad. The good thing about "choice" stories is that you can create parallel threads and the reader can decide which way to go. I will work with you to see what we can create. I also welcome suggestions on how to make links to different story lines. (the spoilers are probably not the best meathod) Edit: I just figured out how to do links! "Shot Down!!! A dogfight 'choice" adventure story A squad hopper is a welcome story too. If you write it, we can add dead ends or options to choose to go back to a previous set of choices. I could drop or modify any of my squad suggestions if no one takes them up or if you have a good name and squad which you would like to suggest but you may not be inspired to write a story, feel free to post it and maybe it will inspire someone else. I'll credit any inserted submissions on the second post on this thread and in the story itself: Example: Check out the Kill’n’Fokkers
Warning: Spoiler!
Write or request more story for your adventures with the Kill’n’Fokkers squad
The Kill'n'Fokkers (by Mac)
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Raven, the Gothic Mistress, is first to welcome you to the squad but you question her motives as she leads you to the dark corner in the back of the hangar... Just kidding! Just an Example! (McFate) Just remember that the working title is "Shot Down!" LOL!
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209619
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and then.....
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While trying to figure out what to do, you decide to check out Kill'n'Fokkers Tats and you discover a secret code which leads you to a hidden website belonging to the squad with butloads of tips and pointers so you take a look and decide to enter a game and give a few a go.
You suddenly find yourself vs the best player in the game (Hairspray) so you try out what you have just learned and BAM you dodge all his fire and race past him at 78738927892.6 mph so you quickly turn and fire and your sweet sweet bullets now seem to to hunt him down like a poor injured animal lost in a field. Everybody is noticing how good you are for a mid-level player and begins to question what you play on and they try to figure it out but they cant, so they start calling you a cheater. Wow, you think to yourself, for 19 levels these guys have been owning me, but I never called them out when their bullets flew at me like magnets at a Billboard sized refrigerator, so why once you figure out how to do the same to them are you suddenly cheating? But you just give it a big "whatever" and keep on killing fools. By the time you finish the game you are just in shock at how the big boys acted once they couldnt take you down, and rather than let everybody think they just got destroyed by a mid-level player (or as they call you "noob") they would rather label you a cheat. So you down a cold one and head to the nearest Tattoo parlor with photo of K.F. logo in hand. You head in and get comfortable as you can while they poke away at your arm. They soon finish and you settle up and head to the coffee shop to upload some pics and let K.F. know their newest recruit just made it official, but before you get through the door your new Tatt is spotted by a dude wearing a whole lot of hairspray. As he approaches you throw up your K.F. Signs to rep your squad and before you can put your hands back down BANG! He pulls out his Glock and unloads in your direction. Fortunatly for you he is not that good of a shot and they all seem to miss. This is when you realize the strange man shooting at you is none other than the one and only "Hairspray", just then you feel a sharp pain in your arm, you brush it off thinking its the tatt but you then realize its the other arm hurting and YOU'VE BEEN SHOT DOWN!!!!......... "To Be Continued"
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209635
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I guess this is a good time as any to release this. I wrote this quite some time ago during a bout of boredom, but I had no intentions of releasing it. Oh well, I guess it couldn't hurt to do it now. I'm not sure if this fits the criteria of the thread, but here goes:
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It’s been this way for as long as you remember.
You question if you’re even alive; if your existence is anything more than just fly, crash, die, repeat. The exasperating drone of WWI-era plane engines and terrifying cracking of machine gun fire has all but consumed your mind. Your reality, whatever it may be, is a living hell with seemingly no end. However, there’s something that compels you to take off that runway every single time. Some unknown urge that pushes you towards a hailstorm of bullets or a torrent of explosive shells in order to complete a unanimous objective. More often than not, you’re not alone. You usually find yourself pitted with (or against) others in this nightmare, and as real and alive as they all may be, you can’t help but feel that all of you are helpless drones trapped in someone, or something’s, unknown agenda. Fly. Crash. Die. Repeat. Why? The time for free thinking is over, as you feel the compulsions return. Before now, nothingness surrounded you, and you were alone with your thoughts. However, slowly, a green world starts to materialize around you, and with it, a new thinking in your mind. It’s all you could describe it as; a separate consciousness within your own that seems to control your body just as a pilot controls her plane. Unable and unwilling to fight it, you let it take you over, and its thoughts become yours. The green plains around you begin to take a more tangible shape. Rolling hills and sporadic trees quickly fill the landscape, and in the distance you see massive mountain formations rise from nothing. The blackness of the sky transforms to a soothing light blue, and you see a large orb of brilliant light glow bright above you. Some artificial structures start appearing around you; airplane hangars, watchtowers, and a paved runway directly below you. Your body is next to appear. From a formless consciousness comes a human being, and an influx of the other senses become a part of you. All this happens in what feels like a few seconds. At first, this entire ordeal was extremely overwhelming to you, but by now you’ve grown accustomed to it, something you’ve taken to call “Spawning”. Your have a body, but you do not attempt to move. The last thing to come into existence is your airplane. An almost an instant, an aircraft that you know by the name “S.E.5” appears below you. You find yourself seated within its cockpit. A string of text flashes in your mind. Bomb the enemy hangars! With the world around you and your objective fully realized, you take no delay. Your plane’s engines come to life on its own, and with a swift movement, you push the throttle and begin take off. The plane’s propeller begins to rotate faster and pushes you along the narrow strip of asphalt. As you gain speed your wings gain lift, you feel the wheels below you part the ground. Your takeoff was swift and clean, something you’ve done many times before in the past. After a long look around you, you find the skies completely empty. No one follows you from the runway behind you. It seems you’re alone for this run. You check your bearing and hope for the best. You take your solitary time to your advantage to appreciate the universe set before you. Other than the dark void that fills most of your time, this is what you’ve come to accept as your home, if it could ever be called such a thing. At times, your home is consumed by a bitter blizzard, or a relentless rainstorm. But sometimes, the sky is littered with a perfect arrangement of clouds, partly blocking the afternoon sun in the distance. Rays of dazzling light squeeze through the clouds and create a comforting palette of yellows, oranges, and reds on the landscape far below. Trees spot the ground far underneath you, and in the distance you pass a small group of houses and homey structures. Towards the passing horizon you see a large reflection of the perfect sky; a lake that stretches for miles. Above it lies an old bridge that connects opposite sides. On one end, an old tavern that gives you a welcoming impression; on the other, quite the opposite, a hauntingly quiet and empty storage hanger. You shiver quietly as it passes from your peripheral vision. A series of familiar buildings break over the horizon before you. It’s your objectives; the enemy hangars that you need to destroy. You check the cumbersome bomb that your aircraft is carrying, and make sure it is ready for deployment. A quick scan of the area around you reveal no enemy aircraft, so you close into the enemy base, smiling with anticipation. As you approach your target, you ready your hand to release the bomb. “The timing must be perfect, and with no distractions, there should be no excuses,” you think to yourself. You aim for the middle of a pair of hangars, in hopes to kill two birds with one stone. You pass over, you release the bomb at best possible time, and mentally cross your fingers. The bomb hits dead-center between the hangars, but they still stand intact. “Damn it!” you shout audibly. With minutes wasted, you turn back towards your home base to re-arm your plane. “I knew I should have gotten the bomb upgrade. Well, at least nobody’s shown up yet, so I should have ti-” Your train of thought is interrupted by a series of text that flashes in your mind. BoomUrDead has joined the game! SkyKiller has joined the game! XxlolSWAGxX has joined the game! UrMOM has joined the game! * - * has joined the game! FyreWolf has joined the game! “Well... great,” you say. Scanning reveals six enemy aircraft spawning in at the airbase not too far behind you. You hear the sound of machine gun fire and see tracer bullets start flying past you. One of these bullets were lucky enough to clip your left wing, and you momentarily lose control of your aircraft. These guys want you dead. Text flashes in your mind. XxlolSWAGxX>Haha n00b ur gonna lose. Already, you know this is going to be interesting... I'm not sure what to make of this myself, so if anyone has anything to say, please do!
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209637
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This has now been loaded into the front page. Come on peeps! More submissions are needed! (Hey Joe, I hope you don't mind, I did a touch of editing to your piece. Let me know it it's a problem. I didn't change any content, just a bit of punctuation.) Yea! Awesome Joe! That's the spirit! Exactly the kind of thing I'm hoping for here. (Of course I'm hoping for anything really...(maybe someone else will make a love story...) I will add it in to the first post when I get home to my computer. Feel free to make edits or corrections here anytime and let me know so I can replace it with any "final drafts" or continuations.
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209639
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This has now been loaded into the front page. Come on peeps! More submissions are needed! Awesome Luna! Could we make this some sort of a vision quest as part of an initiation into the Delta 9 High Flyerz? Lol, it's up you but I could easily incorporate it into that thread with a short transition.
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209656
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Bom me exploto la cabeza y hay estaba.un tipo que no entendia mucho, ni de.foros ni d juegos
Ni siqiera de escribir, pero ese tipo fue feliz...al pricipio todo hera.oscuro no conseguia caer nada todos los demas pilotos le destrozaban.ni siquiera su eqipo le.entendia.pero con el tiempo los pozos oscuros se covirtieron en lagos trasparentes como un espejo, ya no le temblaba el pulso eso tipo hera respetado y tambien querido por sus amigos, jamas lloro, siempre aprendiendo, siempre alegre, ese maldito juego le envolvio pero tambien para ser feliz.ya nadie mas se rio de aquel tipo, ese tipo sigue escribiendo sobre la guerra y tambien sobre la paz.
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209705
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Chill with the Delta 9 High Flyerz
(featuring : "Fly. Crash. Die. Repeat." by Luna) used here as the "vision quest"
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209740
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I'm sorry it took a while for me to respond. I was busy writing last night. Translation: (some parts did not translate well. Could you check and possibly try to make it able to translate a little better?) Bom my head exploded and there was a guy who did not understand much, or forums or d games siqiera not write, but that guy was happy ... at all dark hera pricipio not drop anything getting all other pilots smashed him. even his eqipo understood but eventually dark wells covirtieron in transparent lakes as a mirror, no longer trembling pulse that hera kind respected and well liked by his friends, never cry, always learning, always cheerful, that damn enveloped her game but also to be happy and no one else laughed at that guy, that guy is still writing about the war and also about peace. Thank you for contributing, Charlie8. |
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209865
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Here is an idea for a start for the "Mean Streak" squad.
Check out the Mean Streak squad
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209934
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Please help collaborate! I intend "Mean Streak" to be a front for a "black water" sort of thing where they are using a video game to scout talent for remote drone pilots. (think "Ender's Game" or "The Last Starfighter" ) |
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209942
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Idk how to spoiler, so McFate, can I post this here, no spoiler, and then you can do that stuff for me in post 1?
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209946
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Sure Mac no problem! I'd actually prefer it if people just post their submissions instead of quoting the whole first page. It makes it a lot easier to insert it later. But just so you know, to use spoilers you just hit the icon that looks like a webpage with a green arrow pointing down. Then a thing that looks like this will pop up: [spoiler*][/spoiler] (I put in an extra * so it won't just turn into a spoiler) Then you can paste or type your text between the ][ . |
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209953
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Warning: Spoiler!
MAMAzBoYz. The big guns. You've been in near-awe of them from day one. And now, Eddie P. Rex has just invited you. But it.s not just MAMAzBoYs. You look at all the big names that just invited you. Do the swords really have that much power?you wonder.
You look at your kdr and the player menu, thanking God that you had the fortune to have your best game in a lobby with all these guys. You do your best to hide your exhilaration. "lol um lemme think about it" you type. It's a screen, they have no idea how awesome this is. VonDouche pretends to be upset. "what's to think about?" He replies. Then, realizing that you might legitimately think he's upset, he quickly adds "lol jk". The game rolls on, and the kills pile up. So do the deaths. Parachutes have a one-in-ten chance of ever hitting the ground, and the valley of death has become a veritable elephant graveyard of carnage. It finally ends with Eddie P. Rex splitting through the red defense and grabbing that final hangar. An eight-kill streak, with some elite-level spiraling thrown in as Mr. Blunt pulled off the runway for a final shot. And that might be what makes your decision. MAMAzBoYs, definitely, you think with grim satisfaction. At the very least, I'll have an excuse to switch sides when Eddie is red "Place your request, then PM Cry, so your request can be voted on and processed" instructs UltimateF1, the premier dogfight master of MAMAzBoYz. I can't believe this, you think. I'm gonna be in. Omg. Just... Wow. TWO DAYS LATER You're in. You were accepted. You post an emotional little anecdote on the thread, thanking the members for accepting you. An hour later you check back. 7 "thank you's". So it begins, you think. You go to fly, checking out the brand new tag, and see how it fits. Messiness? Vimy? Festubert? you wonder vaguely. Festubert. Definitely Festubert. You enter the server, and are awe-stricken immediately. There, resplendant in his SSIV and a blue tag over his head, is Cry. Cry is THE man. The most polarizing figure in Dogfight, Cry has been around since Zuperman decided to make a WWI flight simulator. He is as witty and intelligent as he is hard to shoot. He may not be the best pilot in Dogfight, but he's the best that everyone knows about. And here he is, on your team. "Welcome to MAMAzBoYz, bud" he types. "Thx, mate," is your hurried reply. You have a battle to fight. This. Is. Awesome Chapter two to come... Um... Whenever I get around to it!
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #209962
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Check out the MAMAsBoYz
Thanks Mac! I love it! If you feel inclined to make any changes or edits just do it on your original submission post and let me know. I will replace it in the first page. This has now been loaded into the front page! Come on peeps! More submissions are needed!
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #210121
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I Luv It!, This game the people who really care about it , are just awesome , I like all those mean pilot's , and there sometime's "cocky" attitude's , lol. But there's not a better squad to be flying with than
NLR
,It's the respect we give each other and our fellow squad's,and MAMAsBoYz fall outta the sky just like the rest off us, lol.Sir McFatal I'm very happy you made your choice the LoonyRepublic, your a perfect fit my friend, and the thread is hilarious...
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #210207
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Just saw your request.
I'll work on the updated tunnels for you. Love your idea!
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #210382
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Hey!
More stories please! We could also use some relevant pics or screenshots or links to other forum threads too. Just post them here and I'll insert them. Keep checking back. I've been adding to the stories bit by bit as well as making edits and such. If you have anything you think would be a good addition, even if it's just a fictitious name or a joke.... I'll post here when a particular thread is finished or anytime an new submission is added. I'm currently working on the Mean Streak story line. I've got the outline and it's going to get crazy! We're taking dogfight into space to fight off the most wretched and evil one.... TheGodofGods , the daelik of Dogfight past is trying to destroy Gretchland! Will he and his asshat minions succeeded in driving everyone back IRL? "In Real Life" It's up to the cunning plans of Dogfights most dedicated pilots! (Feedback is more than appreciated. I haven't written any short stories since high school.)
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #210390
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I have sat and wrote 2 or 3 paragraphs a few times. Everytime I read it back it sounds too lame and I erase it. I will keep trying.
ALL IN 100%
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #210503
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Búm me exploto la cabeza y hay estaba úno que nó entendia mucho, ni de foros ni de juegos.
Ni siqiera de escribir, pero ese piloto al final fue felíz...al pricipio todo hera oscuro no conseguia caer a nadie bién, todos los demas pilotos le destrozaban ni siquiera su equipo le entendia,pero con el tiempo los pozos oscuros se covirtieron en lagos trasparentes como un espejo, ya no le temblaba el pulso ese piloto hera respetado y tambien querido por sus amigos, jamas lloro, siempre aprendiendo, siempre alegre, ese maldito juego le envolvio pero también para ser feliz.ya nadie mas se río de aquel hombre ese hombre sigue escribiendo sobre la guerra y tambien sobre la paz. |
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #210756
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MAMAzBoYs. Chapter 2.
Warning: Spoiler!
Two weeks later, and things have settled down a bit. You're flying quite a bit, and the experience has been great so far. The best part is unfolding right now.
You are in Borimov. Bomb the base. 2-v-3. You and that level 28 that never talks are German. The blues include a group captain who apparently thinks that sneaking around the edge of the map is an effective strategy in a tank, a level 29, named SneakySnake, who talks way too much and usually gets shot while typing, and a level 18 from one of those newer squads with a bird in its name, who seems very worried about your tag. "Is there such thing as 'MAMA love?'" He asks? You frown. "Mama love"? You've never heard the term before. "so i tld my cuz, 'thats a turky' lololol" types level SneakySnake as you unload 8 shots into him. "Of course there's mama love," you reply. "How do YOU think you were born?" "my mama is white, but my dad is white too lololol" SneakySnake as you destroy his tank. "Am I on the love list?" asks the level 18. "i have 2 gfs, but they dont no about each other lol" SneakySnake crashed You're starting to get the picture. By "love list", djiuhv (as the level 18 is named. Why? I have no clue) is referring to some sort of hit list: players your squadron hates and spawnkills relentlessly. "My squadron leader hates MAMAz, so he told them he wanted them dead" explains djiuhv. "dont hate ur momma, bro, youll gey unborn lolol" SneakySnake brought down by FullBlown (your teammate) You pull over, bombing the hangar. Djiuhv is parked in the runway, and Snake crashes into him. ("lolol") "Yep, we have the list, and you're on top," you quip, and begin to relentlessly spawnkill him. Snake quits. Within 5 minutes, Djiuhv also quits. You and Fullblown collect the rest of the hangars. The Air Commodore in the tank is never seen again. To this day, his ghost is said to still haunt the corner of Borimov, in a tipped-over tank. Later, you're on world chat, celebrating a hard-fought, 2-hour epic. "I think we destroyed more planes that game than the entirety of both world wars", you type. "Not a chance." ?? You look at the name, and moan inwardly. It's DryGuy. The crusty veteran who can't take a joke, or let anything go, for that matter. "It was a joke dude" replies Dipster, your chat companion, who finished the previous game with a 2:1 ratio. "I never said it wasn't, I was just saying, you could not have possibly destroyed more planes than both world wars". "Seriously?" "Yes, apparently unlike you." The argument continues for several minutes. Finally, with all the joy sucked out of your momentary experience, you exit chat. Some things, you just can't win
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #210783
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Thank you Mac! This has now been inserted into the first page. Hey everyone! Keep them coming. Please understand that you do not need to write an entire story arch. If you want to submit a side story it can be added to anywhere as a 'spoiler' option. For example someone in any of their stories could go out to the Jolly Roger and have a beer. As an option you could stiff the bartender and insult the bar just to see if you can make it back out the door or you could tip generously and be graced with some good bartender style jokes. Or you could play cards and/or gamble, win or lose planes and upgrades. Anything is possible and welcome as long as it isn't mean. |
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"Shot Down!!!" A dogfight "choice" adventure story 9 years 8 months ago #211022
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Still coming, Paul? I'm working on a part in the " (I'm still adding as I write it.) |
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