Hamers wrote: calvin you shouldn't call people names it will get you nowhere.

Slenderman wrote:

Hamers wrote: calvin you shouldn't call people names it will get you nowhere.

lol.

Just ask me it never helps.

Lol, dont be so hardon urself hamers.

Too late ifor that oh well. Let's forget I said anything.

Take to the skies with "Dogfight" the aerial combat simulator.
Multiple types of aircraft, single or on-line multiplayer, varying missions.
Dogfight is a game set in the first world war, the aircraft are authentic and engaging. fly solo in dogfight mode or as a team using the chat system to talk to other pilots from around the globe in real-timd and work together to achieve your goals. The full version of the game is not expensive and once you've played it you will be hooked!.

I like where your going but you need to be longer.

3 days left guys...
slender i thought you were going to also submit, i was curious to see the outcome

He said he didnt want to cuz he didnt need the points, and was getting a shirt for being a mod.

Oh, Z, so whats the ruling on mine? Can the full one be used? Theyre the same thing with a couple things removed.

£oser wrote: When I had the free version everytime I got in a tank I lost connection.

That was a bug long long long time ago. It wasn't due to it been free. It was happening to everybody those days until it was fixed

All features are available at the free version except upgrading after the second airplane or hitting higher than rank 5.

CalvinIsAwesome wrote: Oh, Z, so whats the ruling on mine? Can the full one be used? Theyre the same thing with a couple things removed.

Yeah, it can.

About slender not playing because he doesn't need the shirt or points... it doesn't matter, he can play and I just won't include him on the contest if he doesn't want to. I just want to see his writing skills lol

zuperman wrote: I just want to see his writing skills lol

You're right! He's very good at writing imaginative and surprising stories, so he might be able to write a good, short and catching description of the game too.

madtothebone1 wrote: ...Dogfight is a game set in the first world war, the aircraft are authentic and engaging. Fly solo in dogfight mode or as a team using the chat system to talk to other pilots from around the globe in real-time ... you will be hooked!.

Very good Mad! Especially the part about interacting with other pilots from around the world!

Great Z, thanks.

Lol, I'd kinda like to see what he can come up with too

Hmmmm..... I dont remember losing connection with a tank. Loser, i thought you were pretty new? I dont remember ever hearing about that.

Z, I have to say youre wrong about this. You can get wayyyy past rank 5 as a free player. Cangrejomg couldnt pay cuz he doesnt have a credit card, and he said he couldnt find a gift card for itunes because he lives in Guatemala. I think he was on the top 100 before he managed to get $10 gift card to buy the game and some credits. Lol, he got his hands on it right after you increased the price! anyway, he was definately up there before he payed a dime. Any chance if you select spanish instead of english it doesnt make you pay? Glitch in the system, maybe. You can talk to him for details.

And Calvin, in my opinion your introduction looks good now. There are some excellent elements that you use to manipulate the imagination of the reader in just the right way.

Thanks Veidar!

I'm not going to enter becouse I have never won any contest I have entered. Even writing contests.

Well you cant win a contest you dont enter.

Seriously, tho, theres two kinds of contests: theres raffles, which are pure luck, and theres contests like this where the best one wins. If you arent a good writer, then enter contests that dont involve writing.

Ok hear it goes. Feel free to laugh as well at the how bad it is lol.

The year is 1917 war has been raging across eroupe for 3 bloody years. The skys have become a battle field filled with flying led and burning canvas. The air has become a bloody waste land filled with pilots and there planes duling to the death and giving there lives for their nation. The question is who will become the ace of aces and lead there side to victory? Who will have the guts and the skill the to challenge the legends of dogfight and bring them down in flames? Will that pilot be you or will you crumble at the challenge?

Come and join dogfight and fight for your nation. You can fly as a fighter pilot or fight in a tank and even a solder. Join or create a squadron and fight in wars against other squads to prove your skill and honor. Fight in aggressive dogfights or be a cunning bomber and send your enemys base up in flames. FIght with your friends and even have a chat with your friends or foes while you fly. Shoot down the sausage or the zeplen to protect you home base from doom, Or protect the zeplen and send your foes into a exploding doom. Fly solo in the practice mod to get a hold of your plane then join the war and go into multiplayer and fight in a real battle. Come and join dogfight and become a legend of the sky.


Ok Have fun laughing at my fail. And if i did do any good and won something i will take the points if they go for ranking up if they go for just buying planes i don't need them. T shirt I don't need.

Not bad, sky!

Well i am glad you like it lol. It still failed.

Skydavis1 wrote: Well i am glad you like it lol. It still failed.

I enjoyed it as well.

Hi everyone,

The contest is ending tonight!
We'll follow a US schedule since most people is familiar with it. Tonight at midnight (Eastern Standard Time, basically the hour in New York), we'll close submissions and announce a winner 24 hours afterwards.

Keep them coming, we are enjoying reading through the great submissions already and we have freshly ironed t-shirt and points ready

here is mine it might not be the best but here i go:

YOUR COUNTRY NEEDS YOU

the year is 1914 war is raging all across Europe will you help fight the enemy?

Dogfight is a action packed muliti player airplane war game. take to the skies and fly with fellow piolits from all over the world. fioght in a plane, in a tank, or as a soldier. there are many exciting game modes from free for all to bomb the base. new updates all the time.

do you have what it take to be world war 1's top ace?





well there it is. i did my best i hope i win but i probly wont.

In Times of war, when there seems to be no end in sight. Strap on your goggles and go full throttle into the wild blue for an exhilarating aerial warfare experience that will keep you coming back for more.

Step into the shoes of a WWI fighter pilot in the depths of war where you will take-off and take-on the fight to become the #1 ace. Featuring single and multiplayer modes along with a great community of pilots who will help you to learn the ropes of these dangerous missions including bombing, capturing enemy aircraft carriers, protecting or attacking zeppelins, and intense dogfights. You won't only be piloting various authentic aircraft, but also tanks and walking soldier after you land under parachute when brought down by the enemy.

See you in the skies,Good Luck and Godspeed!

yep i lost lol hammers and jacob killd mine.

How did I kill you I sucked.

Lol Thanks Sky, I guess good beer is my muse.

Hamers urs was fine!

Thanks everyone for taking part in the contest!

We'll review all the descriptions and announce the winners asap.


big hug!!
Virginia.