Hi everyone!

We've had the same description for Dogfight on Android and Apple for a long long time, so we were thinking to do a refresh and coming up with new ideas. We wrote a few but we thought to create a contest!

Prizes:
For the winner:
One Dogfight t-shirt shipped to your house with your name on it.
100,000 points to use in game.
Knowing that you were THAT person that wrote it when you see it on numerous sites. You can brag about it all you want and point to this thread as proof!

Second place:
75,000 points to use in game.

Third place:
50,000 points to use in game.

Rules: Post on this thread what you consider to be descriptive and persuasive (the objective is to motivate people to try out the game!) to add to the description of the game. You could also create a story around it if you feel compelled to do so. Just remember the first paragraph has to be awesome since it's the one that displays on the sites until you hit "more details".
The length of the story/description can be up to 2500 characters.
(the boring legal stuff: by submitting to this thread, you give Echoboom S.L. the rights for the text. Echoboom will be free to use it in full or edited in any media, including but not limited to: web sites, marketing material, cookie and oreo print, big walls on highways, stamps, cars, shoes, airplanes carrying banners, etc.)

We at Echoboom will read all the posts and decide a winner on Monday July 2nd, 2012. We will announce it here.
Also if you have favorites, hit the "thanks" button under their posts, so we also see what you guys like best.

As two examples, the current description that we want to change and one created internally:

--- current one ---

★★★★★ "Totally awsome! Great graphics. 5*" - Aspen
★★★★★ "Really fun! Nice controls and not easy, worth the money" - Tom
★★★★★ "Awesome i will never get rid of the great game" - Joe
★★★★★ "Can't get better than this if you are looking for a good multiplayer online game... Very pleased - Brennon

Dogfight is a WWI based multiplayer airplane game & action packed!

Fly through training levels all the way up to full-blown dogfights against enemy planes. Playing alone is fun but the real fun is going multiplayer against your friends.

Watch videos of the game and join the community at www.dogfightplay.com

---- one very short one created internally (just as a very short example ----
The cruelest war of all times has to be fought by the most agile men: aviators. Pioneers of the air! Team up with the best men and help stop the air raids. Don’t let anyone threaten you.

Watch videos of the game and join the community at www.dogfightplay.com

---

Can you do better?
Show your writing skills!

Good thing I have some mad English skills. But I have to ask -- are moderators allowed to participate?

yep, open to everyone

Yeah, so I'm not good at writing. Where do I purchase one of these "Dogfight T-Shirts" that you speak of?

nowhere right now. T-shirts are only custom made at the moment.

Here's my entry. (Can we enter more than once?)


Do you have what it takes to be an Ace? Take to the skies in a Sopwith Camel biplane, or as the Red Barron in his famous Fokker triplane. DOGFIGHT is a WWI-based biplane simulator game that allows you to fly both solo and multiplayer missions. Compete against the computer or against fellow aviators from around the globe. Team up with other flyers to bomb enemy airports, take over aircraft carriers, or fly escort to a mighty zeppelin. ‘Dogfight’ mode allows you to go head-to-head against other pilots in a free-for-all. But watch out! As tracers fill the sky, don’t forget to check your six! If you are shot down, bail out in a hurry and climb into a tank to continue your assault on the enemy airport or carrier. The FREE app allows full access to DOGFIGHT and all missions for a limited time. Lifetime license is just $4.99. Note: upgradeable airplanes may be purchased only after attaining commensurate rank. Download the free app today and see what more than one million users are talking about. Join the fight . . . the DOGFIGHT.
Watch videos of the game and join the community at www.dogfightplay.com.

Become enthralled, get your heart racing, and totally zone out within a virtual world of daring aerial combat, low-altitude bombing, tank driving, and sniping. Discover your inner killer as handheld computing’s best dogfight game chills you and thrills you while avoiding homework, family, talking to girls, work or retirement as you battle aces around the world in multi-player action to rule the skies!

nope, only one, so you have to think your text hard, and edit your post if you want to update it

Captain Ryan wrote: Here's my entry. (Can we enter more than once?)


Do you have what it takes to be an Ace? Take to the skies in a Sopwith Camel biplane, or as the Red Barron in his famous Fokker triplane. DOGFIGHT is a WWI-based biplane simulator game that allows you to fly both solo and multiplayer missions. Compete against the computer or against fellow aviators from around the globe. Team up with other flyers to bomb enemy airports, take over aircraft carriers, or fly escort to a mighty zeppelin. ‘Dogfight’ mode allows you to go head-to-head against other pilots in a free-for-all. But watch out! As tracers fill the sky, don’t forget to check your six! If you are shot down, bail out in a hurry and climb into a tank to continue your assault on the enemy airport or carrier. The FREE app allows full access to DOGFIGHT and all missions for a limited time. Lifetime license is just $4.99. Note: upgradeable airplanes may be purchased only after attaining commensurate rank. Download the free app today and see what more than one million users are talking about. Join the fight . . . the DOGFIGHT.
Watch videos of the game and join the community at www.dogfightplay.com.

Can this be my entry too? lol

DOGFIGHT the game....So much fun I dropped my phone in the toilet....

Sorry Z I couldn't help myself.....


The game is awsome

Here's my stab at it
Did you ever wonder what it was like to be an ace aviator during WWI? Now is your chance! You can train like the aces did in those days in the single player missions, and when you feel confident enough to take on real aces, try the multiplayer missions. Multiplayer lets you fly with or against people from around the world while being able to talk with them live in the game! There are multiplayer missions such as, Capture the Carrier, Destroy the Enemies Airport, Destroy the Enemies Carrier, and the famous Dogfight! There is also a dedicated forum to the game where you can discuss the game or just chat with your in game friends! So what do you think? Ready to give it a shot? You could be the next top ace!

dentinhead wrote: DOGFIGHT the game....So much fun I dropped my phone in the toilet because a ace Sputnik kept shooting me down

[e]Sputnik wrote:

dentinhead wrote: DOGFIGHT the game....So much fun I dropped my phone in the toilet because a ace Sputnik kept shooting me down

HAHAHA You made my wife laugh at me Sput.... good goin.....lolololololol

Lol
Tell you're wife she has good humor

Okay, sorry for any misspellings, the iPad isn't my prefered typing device. Feel free to correct, please. Same with grammar.

Do you want to feel like a real WWI pilot? Try Dogfight, the most realistic, challenging, addictive game available today! You can fly a wide variety of highly detailed WWI era planes into ferocious battles against live enemy pilots, giving you full control over your plane, making dips and turns and barrel rolls to lead an enemy right into a trap with another teammate, coordinated using the live chat to talk to your teammates and create a plan of attack that will allow you to triumph over your opponets and impossible odds! Watch as you learn to send white hot balls of lead straight through a plane, and send them falling to the ground like a flaming rock! Become part of a close-knit group of highly trained ace pilots in the skies, while learning to understand your enemy, and discover how to win a duel with any pilot before you even have a chance to slam your finger down to fire your guns! Work to upgrade your planes using hard earned cash, gained for each kill! Learn to preform as part of a team in challenging games where you bomb airports, aircraft carriers, shoot down an enemy zeppelin or fight to the death to protect it, and much, much more! Drive a tank under heavy fire into an enemy airport and wreak havoc, or learn to be one of the select few who can shoot down a speeding airplane midflight using a single shell! Come be a part of the community today, download Dogfight the Game now!

These are real quotes from real people posted on the public forum, which can be found at dogfightplay.com, featuring an exiting video of real gameplay, screenshots taken mid-combat, and secret tips on how to become a future ace! (Any grammatical/spelling errors are original to the text these quotes were selected from.)

"It's been a blast and I've enjoyed every minutes of it. Because of my injuries, specifically my hand ( considering I only have one ) I feel I've reached the highest level possible. B I promise to keep in touch, other friends I will drop in from time to time.

"It's just gotten to painful to hold the iPad long enough to play several of the missions."
-Duckwing1, USA military vet and triple amputee, winner of a Purple Heart

"DOGFIGHT the game....So much fun I dropped my phone in the toilet...."
-Dentinhead

The social interaction makes Dogfight the Game really different! You can enter as a novice and ask for help, and very often, even in the heat of the fight, an experienced player will explain to you what to do and how to succeed."
-Veidar2

Download Dogfight now, and come visit the community at dogfightplay.com!

This is 2544 characters, Z. It's several hundred less if spaces aren't included in the total. Are they? If they are, I can cut it down a tiny bit. The following is the shortened version, which is 2499 characters, but it's still missing some of the original. If you choose mine, use the above if possible, if not, use this one. It's the exact same thing with some minor edits, mainly cutting small bits of text.

Do you want to feel like a real WWI pilot? Try Dogfight, the most realistic, challenging, addictive game available today! You can fly a wide variety of highly detailed WWI era planes into ferocious battles against live enemy pilots, giving you full control over your plane, making dips and turns and barrel rolls to lead an enemy right into a trap with another teammate, coordinated using the live chat to talk to your teammates and create a plan of attack that will allow you to triumph over your opponets and impossible odds! Watch as you learn to send white hot balls of lead straight through a plane, and send them falling to the ground like a flaming rock! Become part of a close-knit group of highly trained ace pilots in the skies, while learning to understand your enemy, and discover how to win a duel with any pilot before you even have a chance to slam your finger down to fire your guns! Work to upgrade your planes using hard earned cash gained for each kill! Learn to preform as part of a team in challenging games where you bomb airports, aircraft carriers, shoot down an enemy zeppelin or fight to the death to protect it, and much, much more! Drive a tank under heavy fire into an enemy airport and wreak havoc, or learn to be one of the select few who can shoot down a speeding airplane midflight using a single shell! Come be a part of the community today, download Dogfight the Game now!

These are real quotes from real people posted on the public forum, which can be found at dogfightplay.com, featuring an exciting video of real gameplay, screenshots taken mid-combat, and secret tips on how to become a future ace! (Any grammatical/spelling errors are original.)

"It's been a blast and I've enjoyed every minutes of it. Because of my injuries, specifically my hand ( considering I only have one ) I feel I've reached the highest level possible. B I promise to keep in touch, other friends I will drop in from time to time.

It's just gotten to painful to hold the iPad long enough to play several of the missions."
-Duckwing1, USA military sniper, vet and triple amputee, winner of a Purple Heart

“The social interaction makes Dogfight the Game really different! You can enter as a novice and ask for help, and very often, even in the heat of the fight, an experienced player will explain to you what to do and how to succeed.”
-Veidar2

“DOGFIGHT the game..So much fun I dropped my phone in the toilet..”
-Dentinhead

Download Dogfight now, and visit the community at dogfightplay.com!

Not sure about this but....

WW1 fan? Plane lover? Even both! This is the game for you!! Dogfights lets you take to the sky's as 8 planes. With a forum, practice, and multiplayer section this is suitable for head to head, co-op, singleplayer, and more you'll have hours of fun running around by yourself or with friends! The forum has lively threads and a unique ranking system. As with squads you can join. In multiplayer there's also a helpful chat bar where you can talk to your teammates and enemy. There are over 31 ranks in multiplayer too starting from aspirant to marshal of royal air force.

For only $4.99 you can buy the full edition and have even more fun. The options in full edition are; Tanks where you can get into, a sniper/soldier you can use, and different airplanes! And for only $0.99 you can get 25,000 Dc now that's a lot. Join today and become a killer of enemy's!!

Lol, id like to point out that thats kind of twisting the facts, loser. the tank and soldier are available with or without the full version, or has that changed since I had the free version? Also, theres EXACTLY 31 ranks, not OVER.

See ya in the skies bro!

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Lol, for once im glad i read all the way thru someone promising me free stuff! Hilarious!

Oh, and am I allowed to quote people from the forum? Since technically it would be written by you, and you have legal permission to sell stuff posted here, right?

yep, allowed to quote

Great, thanks!

"I was born in 1896 and flew in the GREAT WAR. I became the 2nd highest ACE during that conflict. Now that the war is over, I get to fly here on DOG FIGHT! Come fly with me and test YOUR skills!" Ernst Udet, ACE

Dog Fight is THE premier multiplayer (8 players per mission) game on the internet. Dogfight, bomb carriers, and destroy the enemy's base. Exceptional graphics and smooth operation. The better you get, the quicker you get promoted and accquire new planes. Want to drive a tank? Be a foot soldier? You can do it all here! Get good and join a squadron!

Enter the forum to learn tips, hints, and tricks from a GREAT group of fellow pilots!

Note to parents: We keep it kid friendly!

The most FUN you can have for a few bucks.
Easy to learn and ENJOYMENT for a lifetime!

Seattle wrote: Become enthralled, get your heart racing, and totally zone out within a virtual world of daring aerial combat, low-altitude bombing, tank driving, and sniping. Discover your inner killer as handheld computing’s best dogfight game chills you and thrills you while avoiding homework, family, talking to girls, work or retirement as you battle aces around the world in multi-player action to rule the skies!

Comedic gold right here, folks.

Feel the thrill of multiplayer, multidimensional World War I aerial combat.

Download Dogfight app today to find yourself in one of many classic WWI fighter planes firing your machineguns at enemy aircraft, dive bombing enemy positions, and outmaneuvering your foe. Be prepared to fill the skies with lead as you evade lethal paratroopers and attempt to destroy heavy armored tanks as they thunder across the terrain to destroy your base!

=>Experience the exhilaration of flying a WWI fighter plane!
=>See smoke and fire plum out of enemy fighters as you shoot them down!
=>Tanks explode and burst into flame as you drill their armored skin with a hail of machinegun fire!
=>Fight as a team in strategic scenarios or engage in the challenge of free for all dogfights!
=>Amazing graphics!
=>Play in practice mode or play with others in multiplayer mode.
=>Advance in rank as you advance in skill.

Watch videos of the game and join the community at www.dogfightplay.com

Scenarios include:

=>Dogfight
=>Capture the Carrier
=>Protect/Destroy the Zeppelin
=>Destroy the enemy base
=>Sink the carrier

And if you get shot down, all is not lost. You’ll be able to fire at enemy aircraft as you parachute down to earth. Once you hit the ground, you can decide to climb back into the cockpit of a new fighter plane or continue the mission as a tank and create havoc and terror as you fire your tanks canon and decimate all that lies before you in massive explosions.

=>Download the app
=>Climb into the cockpit
=>Hit Full throttle
=>Take to the skies
=>Be the next Ace

Dogfight the Game is a WW1 on-line combat flight simulator with a difference!

REALISTIC GRAPHICS
You'll have beautifully modelled planes with realistic maneuvering, landing and takeoff characteristics, in an on-line multiplayer game that's easily learned, and runs smoothly on mobile phones.

COMBAT SCENARIOS
There are five different game scenarios. In each of them you will be randomly stationed at an allied or a German airfield, and you will fight for that side for the duration of each game. The mainstay of the game is air-to-air combat, but you can also go by foot or drive a tank. The ground targets include hangars, buildings, aircraft carriers and a bridge.

ACTION AND SUPPORT
The game offers quick action that forces you to twist and bend over backwards to get the enemy in your sights, but there's also friendship and chivalry and greetings when pilots meet in the air.

SOCIAL ASPECT
The social interaction makes Dogfight the Game really different! You can enter as a novice and ask for help, and very often, even in the heat of the fight, an experienced player will explain to you what to do and how to succeed. The social aspect may in part explain Dogfight the Game's appeal to boys and girls of all ages. There are many teenagers among the estimated 100 000 players, but the average age is as high as 29, and there are players younger than ten and older than 75 years!

A GAME THAT BECOMES BETTER ALL THE TIME!
Dogfight the Game comes with a full featured on-line forum where every aspect of the game is constantly turned over and examined and praised or condemned according to the opinions of the players. - And different to other games, the program developer is present and listens attentively to the advice given, and changes the game accordingly.

CalvinIsAwesome wrote: Lol, id like to point out that thats kind of twisting the facts, loser. the tank and soldier are available with or without the full version, or has that changed since I had the free version? Also, theres EXACTLY 31 ranks, not OVER.

See ya in the skies bro!

When I had the free version everytime I got in a tank I lost connection.

CalvinIsAwesome wrote: Lol, id like to point out that thats kind of twisting the facts, loser. the tank and soldier are available with or without the full version, or has that changed since I had the free version? Also, theres EXACTLY 31 ranks, not OVER.

See ya in the skies bro!

Lol btw I thought there was more lmao

calvin you shouldn't call people names it will get you nowhere.

wait, who was I calling names?

Hamers wrote: calvin you shouldn't call people names it will get you nowhere.

Hamers you may have been confused on caliven calling loser loser lol. He wasn't calling loser names he was just calling him by his name.

ohhh that lol nah, hamers, i wasnt calling him a loser. it's his name.