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CORFU... 10 years 2 months ago #284349

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Thought we'd have a break from all the killin n bombin..so relax put ur feet up and be transported to the crystal blue waters of Greece.....

CORFU

Weary shadows and breathless heat
The silver tide that ebbs and flows
Lays down a shimmering carpet of diamonds at your toes.

Leafy sentinels guard the hidden coves
Deep fathomless swirls of greens and blues
Meet with turquoise shimmering hues.

Singing stones that roll and drift upon the breath of the sea
Tumble back into the coolness of the bay
To escape the searing heat of day.

In crystalline shadows
Fishes swim like silver darts
They twist and spin their jagged paths.

Enamelled rock pools hug the shore
Where a host of fishes hide
A microcosm of the sea
Until washed away by the returning tide.

Crickets natures metronomes tick away the time
Stop singing as a distant thunderclap rolls in with the promised sound
Of a summer storm whose rain never hits the ground.

The summer stillness filters through
The silver burnished leaves
That glow like semi-precious stones
Upon the shoulders of the ancient olive trees.

Below the black nets are cast
To catch the falling olive rain
They bleed outwards like false shadows
Across the dusty evening plain.

The palm leaves clatter and clash
As a scented north winds stirs
Their silver rapiers and sabres
Duel with the bending firs.

The jewel like sun set in a cobalt sky
Exalts a fiery show
Applauded by a million diamonds
Glistening just below.

Daylight fades armed with lances of cerise cloud
To battle silently in the fight
Against the advancing deeper hues of night.

Luminous creastss break upon the cooling shore
Above the fireflies lovely dance of light
Weave the stars into the indigo night.

The cool eye of the summer moon
Looks down upon the glowing tavernas along the shore
Like scattered embers of a forest fire lit by the relentless sun the day before.

A new dawn burns the horizon red
And takes the spoils of war
The ever changing battle of light will rage for evermore.

Have fun........
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CORFU... 10 years 2 months ago #284368

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I'm usually not one for poetry, but that was nice
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CORFU... 10 years 2 months ago #284369

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great michael.ahora la mía. El mar....ese
inmenso lago de gran vistosidad,que va recorriendo caminos,dejando grietas atras
golpeando sobre muros y arrecifes de coral con
la fuerza de un imperio arrasando todo vá....es calido y sereno..es fuerte y tenaz
cual dos infiernos atacasen su divinidad..el mar adorna nuestras costas..es pasto de la humanidad..es creación de los dioses..es amor a la verdad..es sosegado y tranquilo...es portador de la maldad...y otras veces acariciando con sus olas vá como si fuese pergamino en las noches de cristal.
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CORFU... 10 years 2 months ago #284441

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Hola amigos, excelentes poemas los suyos, a ver que les parece este que escribí y se publicó en un folleto mensual que publica la institución donde trabajo.


Despierto, sueño...



Escapo de ocasiones
del sueño de la vida,
me oculto entre la niebla
imaginando realidades alternas,
de mundos distintos
de tiempos pausales.

Mi mente divaga
por extensos llanos,
por nutridos bosques,
por cielos inmensos,
por hermosos lagos,
cabalgo, vuelo, navego,
con criaturas mágicas y divinidades
vivo aventuras de un solo momento
momentos que luego son pasado incierto.

Retorno del sueño,
amanezco de un vuelco
a esta vida diaria,
me encuentro que el tiempo
no se ha suspendido,
avanzó a momentos hoy desconocidos.

Sin poder notarlo
los viví sin verlos
momentos aquellos
que hoy yo no recuerdo.

Mi vida trasciende
entre realidades
las que me imagino
y las que son verdades.

En la sombra etérea
de mis fantasías
asoman realidades
que aún no he soñado.

Despierto, despierto he soñado
lo que del sueño no se recupera,
en las dimensiones de mis fantasías
he vivido vidas, he vivido apenas
segundos del día.


Jorge Luis Priego Valencia
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CORFU... 10 years 2 months ago #284455

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WOW aquí hay talento! / WOW we have amazing talent here. :) They are all very beautiful ones; Sir Kane paints with his words a very peaceful description of his beloved country. He transports all of us to see how peaceful a summer day in Greece is like; a journey to the days of innocence. Sir, Charlie a strong description of the beauty and power of the sea. Your words make us experience the fury and the beauty of the sea. Sr. Priego another great poem; you transport us to the clash between the world of dreams and the everyday life we live. How our lives may seem so empty with the everyday problems but at the same time it is a magical journey every time we lay in our beds to sleep or just day dream. Excellent work !! Sr. Kane you should change the title of the tread to POEMS or Penmanship of our Community. Oh and PS: It is important that you all write your names under your poems if they are original!! / Es importante que escriban sus nombres al final de sus respectivos poemas si son originales suyos. LES FELICITO EXCELENTES TRABAJOS MUY BONITOS E INSPIRADORES.
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CORFU... 10 years 2 months ago #284500

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Gracias girl genial y kenne si.son muy bonitos
y la princesa loa describio perfectamente
muy bien amiga.
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CORFU... 10 years 2 months ago #284501

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Nos alegramos que te gusten tal vez deberiamos hacer un topic para escribir cosas bonitas o pequeños poemas,que os parece mi idea?girl encargate de ello y pasamos alli si quiere michael los poemas.y mas.cosa que posamos escribir. :woohoo: :woohoo:
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CORFU... 10 years 2 months ago #284673

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Gracias amiga, me alegra mucho saber que te gustaron los poemas, francamente el de mr. Kane y el de Cahrli igualmente muy bonitos poemas, efectivamente te transportan, te hacen volar, su lectura es agradable.
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