I am looking for everyone that was a part of my short story "tKestrels last flight". I am planning on rewriting the whole thing and making it into a nice book that even the people that are not on dogfight can understand.

The characters in the story that are in the story will be renamed and put in the back of the cover as references. The characters in the story are

1. Grey Ghost
2. Brian Foust
3. Cat of Doom
4. PistolPete
5. Torn
6. Raptor
7. T.R
8. TBuilt
9. VonHulk
10. Gizmo
11. SopwithCamel

If you do not wish to remain in the story please let me know and I will remove your character when I rewrite the story. If you wish to remain in the book, please give me a good name youd like your character to be called. Im looking for real names if at all possible.
I am changing the whole story line, aking it bigger, better detailed, and with a better plot line.
If you dont remember the story and need a refresher, this is the link. read it from first post to last, and parden the stelling errors.
dogfightplay.com/index.php/forum/121st-m...kestrels-last-flight

I'll give this about a week. Those that don't respond, I'll have no choice but to delete or replace. Been putting this off so long. I need to get this done as soon as possible.

Hey what about obamasucks lol

lol. I may be lookng for additions to my story since it will be exceptionally larger. Only reason you wherent in the story when i wrote it was because I didnt know you when I wrote it lol

You can use my name all you want, the first story was awesome.

I didn't see my name in the story.. *sniff*


Good story tKes! (despite me not being in it lol! )

Well, the story was written a long time ago. U may either have not been around wen I wrote it, or I just didn't know u at the time.

Out of curiously. Do. Think I should leave the story in ww1, or turn it into a ww2 era book. I know all more on ww2, plus some more modern tech like radio comm in the planes t help the pilots communicate when flying

Nice story, being a writer myself, my curiosity has me asking...

1. What age range are you looking at for your "target audience"?
2. Will it be illustrated?
3. When you originally wrote the piece, what was your age? Teen, 20's, 30's?

I only ask so I can get a better perspective when dealing with my own writings. If you choose not to answer any or all I understand. Thanks.

My target audience is really anyone. Im not aiming for a kids story or a full out grapgic adult story. Just somethjng that anyone that likes war stoeues would like.

Im also nor much into illustrations. I cant draw worth a crap and finding the perfect picture can be very time consuming.

When i wrote that little sfory was about a year and a half ago, so i was about 16 or 17 when i wrote it

cernicalo friend, you can put my name in history as the red baron ... that okay? You can not miss jeje, greetings. honorable and deadly.

Forgot about all about this Kes,great story,not sure what kind of names your looking for,but you can rename me Jacko if you want lol.

Thanks to everyone who answered the call ive made. All others who where in the story will be replaced with fictional characters.

Special thanks to
Gizmo, Greyghost and Von for actually replying in some way. I believe I will be adding Davy Crockett and Zebra as a way to replace a few of the pilots in the story.
Thx guys.

P.S
I will be changing the story. Id say the title, but i dont want to lose the title to some other bookwriter lol. I may post the finished product whenever i get done, but im not sure if i will or not to be honest. Ill send a "copy" to the people that I have made into characters here.

Hey Kes,

Cat gives his approval to use his name.