Thanks for sharing. I write songs too and for me the hardest part can be "releasing" it.

Your piece reminds me of a saying I used when I was in high school:

."Listen to what I mean, not what I say"

It is so easy for people to misinterpret what someone is saying when they feel insecure. Courage and patience!

Thanks Black! Sounds from fhe heart, and that makes it special! Keep it up!

thank you guys and your welcome Curtis

12/20/10

Its just another day, woke up, got high and played my guitar. Other than "how" today went, is wasnt any different than yesterday and the day before. Well I got to talk to my girlfriend yesterday, didnt go so well. Other than the usual mess of her being a heartless harlot, I just found out she got into a fight in avalon and wont be here for Christmas. It sucks, I was really hoping to see her. For some reason I miss her everyday that goes by. Such a lonely, and cold state of mind to be in without the warmth of her love smothered all over me. But sometimes I wonder "does she miss me?". I had $50 I was honna use to buy her something nice with. The thing is....I just bought more weed with it. Its some good sht too. Oh well, I guess everything worked out.

Cool..but I figured it would have been a df song

Here's an old one of mine:
I usually play it with a mournful funky rhythm with a lot of sliding bass.

Disclaimer: I did not write this song in it's entirety. I am a fan of a small independant musician, and he was doing a cool "fan-assists-with-writing" thing, and he would produce it. I am merely responsible for a fair portion of.the lyrics. He made corrections to add several popular video game references. So. Yeah. This is my Not-My-Song.
Also: if the tempo seems hard to get with, the verses are a sort of rap style. So the song is intended to move fast.
I hope this isn't embarrasing myself.
I love my internet musicians.

"Limelight"

I started this story without a connection,
Narrated my path with a lack of direction
But
Circumstance made that path collide with yours,
Your life saved mine through sliding doors

You see, it's confession time.
You're sweet and good for me like five portions of clementine.
They thought you would would break, but your inner strength shined:
They thought you would change but you never did cry.

And throught the violence and trying times I tried to
Describe that even though you're quite new
That I like you
Fights, true, we had our share
But in those circumstances that is fair.

But you were so smart, and we were so synced,
And you were such a big part of this whole thing
And I care about the others but I know you know it within you
You're special, and so it continues.

Chorus:
This can't be the credits
You were the limelight, you were the limelight, girl
And I'll never find another,
And I'm never going to recover
(Repeat)

Verse 2:
It hurts! Goddamn, it hurts so much!
Like a car crash man, I think I burnt the clutch!
Lost in the far past that consumed you,
I stayed lucky for as long as I knew you.

Now I look at my memories, replay them again, and again, and again
And I can play and pretend
To turn my back to the world and tell it "No sir
There's no way in hell I intend to let her go sir!"

Okay, now I have to trust
'Cuz I really don't want this to be the Last of Us
It was too soon (way too soon)
You were more of a cure than you knew,
Goddamn I loved you!

You elevated me, ele-elevated me, to the next level,
And I hope you know you were dead special though
Cuz I know you knew it within you,
But the games never end, and so it continues

(Chorus again, repeat twice)

You showed me your world.
You let me escape
So never think for a second that I'm forgetting your face,
Never think for a second someone's taking your place!

(Chorus, and fade)

Great Great Fantastico job!!! Love the lyrics Drag

CaliGirlInc. wrote: Great Great Fantastico job!!! Love the lyrics Drag

Drag?

Dragonness,Monster its an abbreviation lol

Here one i wrote today when playing my guitar. I guess it has somewhat relations to this game. Its not named yet, and is about 1/3 finished.

Too much time!
Trapped inside my head
Tryinging to get it right!
So i dont (waste my time!)

The battle rages! (on, and on)
this fighting will never end!
Between the feelings of-
The soul to carry on!

My feelings! Are never hurt!
I march forward!
Into the dredge! Of! No! Re-turn!

So just stop! Everything your doing
These things will never last
the good in my soul!
No they wont break my! Bones!

Whey cant they just get along?
Maybe one day they will!
By why is being hostile?
Always their first natrual instinct!?

so lets flip this over!!

Sorry, for the rage that im in
i must be hung like a drug
In everything thats around me
But im ok
And sorry, for the trouble that im in
You never realize
the pain that im in
But im ok

So if you hear the sound
Of sheeps covered skin
Hiding all my mistakes
These days will last and everythings ok

i just stand!
Yourself empothy!
You wont understand!
This hell that were in!
I take the drug!
that sets me free!
I love the burn!
Of the poison within me!

This can on forever
But we must close it to a end
Ive really appreciate
Everyone that took a stand
And said your welcome
Glad to see you around
The rain has liften off
And the light shine through!

Haha i can wirte this song for ever, and name it 'The Best Song Ever Written". But for now its time for me to fly. Too much time on the ground. Hope to see you around wait till yall hear me rap!! Douces! Peace, love and joy!

EAGLE21