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Can I get feedback on my first writing attempt? 11 years 1 month ago #208580

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This thread was a horrible prank. I've removed the link for the sake of the sanity of all those involved.
You're getting predictable, guys. You can do better, right?
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Can I get feedback on my first writing attempt? 11 years 1 month ago #208588

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Hi Mac.,

I have no doubt about your writing skills. You should go ahead, do what you like. People will follow you.

My best wishes.

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Can I get feedback on my first writing attempt? 11 years 1 month ago #208598

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Dear dogfight,

I'm sorry. That was a horrid prank.
"My Immortal" was actually a fanfic that became popular because of how absolutely dreadful it is.

It is some of the worst writing I (or anyone) has ever seen.

The spelling is awful, the character are worse, and the plot is absolutely nightmarish.

I fully apologize for manipulating people into reading that God-awful "story".

For the full entertainment of how bad it is, go on YouTube and search, "Cry and Friends read my immortal"

The reason I'm revealing the fact that this is a prank so early is that I actually got a couple PMs from people giving me writing suggestions. God bless you.

And MCR rox.


I actually am working on a couple writing projects, but they're none of your darn business.
You're getting predictable, guys. You can do better, right?
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Can I get feedback on my first writing attempt? 11 years 1 month ago #208913

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It was right of you to come clean, Tara. A prank is one thing, but there's nothing funny about My Immortal.

Confession is good for the soul. Hope your soul's doing great. Please give my best to Raven.

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Can I get feedback on my first writing attempt? 11 years 1 month ago #208943

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Lol!!! I tried to read that crap... I couldn't. I thought I better say nothing.

That was a good one. :lol:
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Can I get feedback on my first writing attempt? 11 years 1 month ago #208944

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Ahhhhhhhhh,...........I missed it!

You could try posting it on 'Artist on Dogfight'.........no one goes there anyway, except for those that are useless arty farty caracters themselves, and they are to full of themselves to read anything longer than three sentences.

( anyone sees the attempted humor in this? I posted there regularly......)

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Can I get feedback on my first writing attempt? 11 years 1 month ago #209042

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At first I thought you were the actual author of My Immortal! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Okay, yeah. I knew about My Immortal before; I was a pretty active member of FF.net for the longest time. My first stories were absolutely horrid, but they never really got the spotlight that MI received.

Reading that again brought up some old memories and made my day. Thank you!
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